xeneras on DeviantArthttps://www.deviantart.com/xeneras/art/Jasmine-388459990xeneras

Deviation Actions

xeneras's avatar

Jasmine

By
Published:
13K Views

Description

Model : :iconladylemonne: see more on Photo Model

Follow me on
Blog
Facebook
500px
Image size
1844x1248px 1.18 MB
Make
Canon
Model
Canon EOS 550D
Shutter Speed
1/400 second
Aperture
F/3.2
Focal Length
50 mm
ISO Speed
200
Date Taken
Jul 16, 2013, 6:45:35 PM
Sensor Size
8mm
© 2013 - 2024 xeneras
Comments25
Join the community to add your comment. Already a deviant? Log In
Observer14's avatar
:star::star::star::star: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Impact

Just to echo the comments made by *Philbear, I love the way you layered the curves between the hills, her back and arm, and the sand. You managed to have her face resting in the sand, without losing too much of it.

Her ink goes nicely with the composition too -- adds some interesting color and texture without being overpowering.

Interesting that you didn't quite make it perfectly horizontal... which raises her head just a bit. I like the effect that gives

My personal taste is that her eye makeup is a bit overdone, but that's a question of style.

Last thing is the finger touching the lips in a "sssssssh". It gives the photo emotional depth; a bit of an implied story. More than a pretty face, it's a person with a back-story, maybe someone she is talking to.

(Kind-of guessing at the star ratings, as I'm not entirely clear on what they imply.)