i see that she's wearing accessories which is completely fine, but possibly if they were brighter to draw the colors out of her eyes. and if this was possibly done as a setting under a tree you could have just laid out a mat covered it with sand and have a sand tree of your choice. That way you could play with lighting more and the background might lighten the mood if you wanted to.Also just a thought I've had but, the swim suit could also have a simple print on it it could add a different... Not depth but... mood perhaps? The shawl over her would still work fine in both situations. And i agree with some of the other comentors that the tittle isn't something that makes sense for me . Could you possibly explain it within the description or even alter the title. Again these are just my thoughts and none of them have to be taken to heart. HAVE A NICE DAY!!