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Tighten Up

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Image size
854x1282px 736.14 KB
Make
Canon
Model
Canon EOS 450D
Shutter Speed
1/500 second
Aperture
F/4.5
Focal Length
50 mm
ISO Speed
200
Date Taken
Dec 28, 2010, 3:10:49 PM
Sensor Size
4mm
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RobertFerrucci's avatar
:star::star::star::star: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Impact

Model is great on this, the pose is wonderful and her eyes are really making a statement but not so directly as to make the person viewing think 'oh yes she's doing a pose for a camera' too much.

The one little particle of green from the petals on her leg is a little bit distracting there. The others, upper and lower right aren't so distracting but still give me the impression that perhaps she could perhaps have been better actually blowing them out so they are falling out and down from her, although that would be a difficult one to do, if caught well and below her face would work very nicely here.

Also I know that 'very blurred' style background is very popular but here I think it's a little bit overdone in the mid fore for the type of shot and perspective here. Particularly just to the left of her head could be just a little more defined, gradually drawing off to the horizon and edges.

Last but not leastly here is the lightness on her raised leg, just seems a little bit too bright there compared to the rest of her.

For all that, I still think this is a great pic and her holding the flower petals like that was a nice concept for this outdoor shot.