At first, my eyes clearly caught in sight the model's face. She is unbelievably beautiful and through this image, I can see her determination and that she enjoyed the photoshooting. I like the act that she's wearing white, this gives her a complete aura and blends pretty well with the background. As for the technical aspects, it could have been better, as I think we all are in the process of learning and we don't stop doing that. Her figure seems squeezed into the frame because the artist probably wanted to take a closer photo of her, because by shooting a wider frame, the expression of the model would have been lost. I would have liked to see some sky, in order to balance the reddish contour on her hair given by the sun. All in all, I think you had an inspiring experience, which taught you many things. D.