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This is wonderful shot of a beautiful woman. The natural soft lighting flatters the model and the monochromatic background helps the model stand out.
In some of your photos I don't think the cigarette works that well, at least for me. Sometimes it just doesn't seem to suit the woman. Not so in the photo. Here I think works well, possibly for a combination of three reasons. First the look on the model's face. Second the slightly unkempt hair echo's the candid impression that smoking a cigarette gives. Thirdly I think the model is holding the cigarette in a natural and convincing way.
The one thing I think is less than perfect is the large black graffiti on the left side. Because it's big and contrasts so strongly with the white wall it tends to pull the eye away from the model. The board on the floor behind the model's foot is possibly a similar distraction but with less impact.
Aside from that it's a great shot of a stunning model in a really nice pose. Great work.