Well you did ask for critique. I seldom give comments since most people just want compliments and not honest opinion. Note that most just say "Wowee I've never seen a woman before!" Doesn't really say much about the photographer. But I tried.
So, you get to decide which people matter? So, just so you know I treat people how they tell me they want to be treated... so suck a big greasy cock okay? Just communicating on your level, okay little man.