I love this series of photos that you've done! The outfit and hair are amazing! I some problems with this picture. To me, the way her hands are posed, its hard to tell what she's doing, and it also makes her hands look really large. My second critique is the expression. Its hard to tell what her expression is here and how it works with everything else that she's doing and what's going on around her. But onto my favorite things about this picture! As I've said, I love this models hair. The thought of pigtails makes someone think young and innocent, but you've shown that the pigtails can be used (through this whole series) in a darker area, with a more vibrant color, such as pink.